Final screening

Story line(changed)

A teenage girl went up to her attic in search of her math book and then comes across a USB stick, she decides to take it it school with her the next day. The second day shes at school, showing dedication, but really was disturbed by what could be on the USB. She couldn't wait any longer so she takes it out of her bag, and whet to the nearest computer, leaving her unaware study partner on her own, she checks it out and find several disturbing pictures with a video. 

Initial screening

Out of 60 marks, I reckon am Just about on 30 marks. this is because I have variety shots, although my shot types are not up to standard, However, considering that theres more to be done, I reckon half a mark will be appropriate, seeing that my editing was good. I could aswell improve on the timing aswell as having an easier storyline to stick to. Also I have the sound/music missing due to lack of time management, that aswell are part of the things I need to improve on, seeing that I dint have the time to include it in my initial screening. I may also need to include more shots for the final screening.