Initial screening

Out of 60 marks, I reckon am Just about on 30 marks. this is because I have variety shots, although my shot types are not up to standard, However, considering that theres more to be done, I reckon half a mark will be appropriate, seeing that my editing was good. I could aswell improve on the timing aswell as having an easier storyline to stick to. Also I have the sound/music missing due to lack of time management, that aswell are part of the things I need to improve on, seeing that I dint have the time to include it in my initial screening. I may also need to include more shots for the final screening.